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雅思寫作真題常見的七個問題

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很多小夥伴認爲雅思考試中最難得分的就是雅思寫作題型,要想提高自己的雅思寫作能力,平時一定要養成積累的好習慣。下面是滬江小編給大家整理的一些在雅思寫作中最常出現的問題,大家可以作爲學習的參考。

ing-bottom: 80%;">雅思寫作真題常見的七個問題

雅思寫作語法致命傷1. 雙謂語錯句

Therebe句型屬於雙謂語錯句高發句型,因爲句中的be動詞已經是謂語,而句子後面的動詞通常是定語從句中的成分,故不能作爲主句中的謂語。例句中同時出現了“were”和“study”,根據上面的分析,were應該是謂語,而studyfor career應該是定語從句,因此,例句應修正改成:

For those under 26, there were 80% students who studied for career. 或者Forthose under 26, there were 80% students studying for career.

又如:Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasonscontribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives.應改成:

Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasonscontributing/which contribute to this problem can be identified from threeperspectives.

雅思寫作語法致命傷2. 句子不完整

e.g. The most popular kind of transport was by road.

句中主語是the most popular kind of transport,謂語動詞(系動詞)是was, 而byroad按照語法應該是方式狀語,此句缺乏表語。應改成:

The most popular kind of transport was road.

又如:Many factories in order to get more profits, which made waste water andwaste gas.

去除目的狀語“in order to get more profits”和非限制性定語從句“which made waste water andwaste gas”, 剩下的是many factories, 不能作爲一個句子。根據此句想表達的意思,應改爲:

Many factories in order to get more profits made waste water and wastegas.

雅思寫作語法致命傷3. 主系表結構使用錯誤

e.g. We are impossible to make any progress without correcting themistakes.

此句的主幹結構是:we are impossible“我們是不可能”,表意不對。這種表達在英語中對應的句型是:It is…for…to…,所以應該改成:

It is impossible for us to make any progress without correcting themistakes.

類似的錯誤例句還有:People are very convenient to get information on the Internet.His profession is a teacher.

雅思寫作語法致命傷4. 情態動詞後的動詞原形和動名詞的使用出錯

e.g. Another equally vital point to be considered is that building them maycosts much money and energy.

這種錯誤可能是筆誤,在雅思作文中偶爾出現不至於扣分,但是通篇都是這樣的錯誤,那麼肯定是有影響的。

e.g. Another point to be discussed is that more time spending on computersis harmful to children’s mental health.

“花更多時間在電腦上”這個動詞短語作爲主語應該要用動名詞形式:

Another point to be discussed is that spending more time on computers isharmful to children’s mental health.

雅思寫作語法致命傷5. 標點符號用錯

e.g. As far as I am concerned, people should take exercise and relaxthemselves on a weekly basis. Because it offers great opportunities to releasetheir stress.

Because引導的句子做原因狀語從句,既然是從句,那麼前面就不應該使用句號使其獨立成句,而應該改成逗號,because首字母小寫。

雅思寫作語法致命傷6. 詞性使用錯誤

e.g. One possible solution is using the new energy to instead of thetraditional energy.

Instead of是介詞,而這裏構成to do(不定式),只能用動詞。因此,可改爲:

One possible solution is using the new energy to replace the traditionalenergy.

e.g. Nowadays, some students study many subjects in university, which leadsto that they suffer great mental pressure.

Lead to中to是介詞,後面不能直接加句子,因此可在leads to後加一名詞,構成同位語從句:

Nowadays, some students study many subjects in university, which leads tothe fact that they suffer great mental pressure. 或Nowadays, some students studymany subjects in university, which makes them suffer great mental pressure.

雅思寫作語法致命傷7. 從句的誤用和濫用

e.g. The reason why I assert it is necessary for government to providebetter education and health care for rural areas because it can ensure allcitizens to have access to them.

“why…rural areas”在句中作the reason的定語,固定句式“the reason why…isthat…”why引導的定語從句和that引導的表語從句連用,氣勢磅礴,這就是所謂的高分句型。

e.g. In this essay, I will discuss what those, who are two kinds of peoplein this topic, are how to think and how to choose. 實再迂迴婉轉,不知所云。

很多小夥伴爲了能出國留學,考雅思成爲了一個不錯的選擇。要想雅思考出好的成績,平時一定要端正自己的學習態度,養成良好的學習習慣,制定學習技巧很重要。

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