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全面彙總雅思寫作考生常犯4大錯誤

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雅思寫作有小作文和大作文兩部分租場,兩部分的時間合計爲60分鐘。由於大作文所佔的分數比重是小作文的兩倍,同時該部分A類與G類考題內容以及問題形式趨於一致,也是中國考生錯誤比較密集的部分,所以接下來的內容將圍繞着大作文部分展開。下面我們就來看看在大作文中,考生常會犯的錯。

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雅思寫作考生常犯錯誤

一、語言絕對化

根據能量守恆定律(Law of energy conservation),即“各種能量形式互相轉換是有方向和條件限制的,能量相互轉換時其量值不變,表明能量不能被創造或消滅”,人們在使用語言描述事物變化時,應儘可能避免語言過於絕對化,尤其是在使用第二語言進行正式的書面表述時,更應該注意該語言中非絕對化表達方式的學習,這樣才能盡顯文章內容的客觀性。

二、只回答部分問題

An increasing number of people are moving and living in big cities. Why is this case? Is it a positive or negative trend? (2010年1月23日 G類) 該題有兩個問題,很多考生在作答時忽視了第一問,只回答第二問,抑或是把第一問和該現象積極的一面混爲一談,如:

On the one hand, living in big cities brings about a considerable number of advantages, which is also why people move to big cities. Initially, it is undeniable that work conditions in big cities are usually better that those in countries and small cities. With more work opportunities and a higher level of salary, people in other places, especially the young, are inclined to move to big cities. Subsequently, not only does living in big cities offer people better work conditions, but also it affords dwellers with facilities of higher quality. These facilities, such as the premium hospitals and education resources, are extremely attractive to countryside people and those in small cities. (考生答卷)

三、跑題、偏題嚴重

如Some people think that foreign tourists abroad should be charged more than local people to visit a country’s cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2011年4月30日A類)

就該題而言,很多考生將意思是“收費”的charged一詞理解爲“控制”,而該詞是我們在中學階段就已經學習過的。這就很容易導致作文跑題,而跑題的作文分數爲5分。

四、文章沒有分段

產生該問題的原因主要有:1. 觀點數量少;2. 不知道觀點如何展開;3. 寫作速度太慢。那麼,要在規定時間內滿足字數要求,考生需要想出足夠多的觀點,學習如何展開觀點,熟練運用複雜句並提高寫作速度。接下來我們將分析如何滿足以上要求:

以上就是小編總結的雅思寫作考生常犯錯誤,大家看後看看自己還有哪些方面不足,並及時改正。

  妙用定語從句幫雅思寫作加分

怎樣寫出優美句子——which的巧用(如何延長句子,無限續命,寫出優美的長難句)

翻譯練習:平等的教育能幫助解決學生學習成績不好

l Equal access to education can help tackle educational underachievement

l Equal access to education which can help tackle educational underachievement should be carried out(聯想到被誰)

l Equal access to education which can help tackle educational underachievement should be carried out by local authorities(聯想到可否爲主語)

l Local authorities should ensure equal access to education, which can help tackle educational underachievement, a problem found among disadvantaged children. (最後再做補充)

which的巧用:還可以和不同的介詞搭配,呈現更靈活豐富的表達

翻譯練習:政府的職能包括擴大基礎建設和創造更多就業以便於人們能夠更幸福的生活

l The government function includes expanding the infrastructure and creating more job opportunities, with which people will be able to live a joyful life

l An optimized education system is destined to generate numerous ambitious minors, among which, the elites of our time will also be found

一個優化的教育體制註定會輸出無數的有志青年,而在他們當中就蘊藏着我們這個時代的精英

美文中的賓語從句妙用

When the Indonesian Tsunami occurred, nobody was psychologically prepared for the upcoming disaster which eventually wiped out the entire shore and even the whole city.

例子的描述短小精悍,採用WHICH引導的賓語從句,配合小詞wipe out的使用,讓整個例子變得很形象生動

Although it’s unfair to lower the qualification for them, some counter-measures should be taken for the sake of a better pre-college learning which could enable them to compete with the urban students in the same platform.

讓步語氣+賓語從句的搭配,注意which指代的是better pre-college learning

The feeling and experience you acquired from the real places is visual and genuine, which will definitely give you a precious memory.

一句簡單的賓語從句,但是從語義和邏輯上都很精煉

There is no denying that the creative artists could work as a lubrication when the social disputes and frictions occurred by entertaining people in an artistic and innovative manner, which, to some extent, will also start a new fashion trend or deliver breakthroughs to the realm of art.

經久不衰的“逗號戰術”+好朋友“賓語從句”,無限續命

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