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雅思寫作被壓分了?傳言內地雅思口語寫作一直被壓分,不管是不是存在這樣的問題,雅思寫作壓分了怎麼辦,果斷去雅思複議。不過雅思複議是一件很嚴肅的事,每個考生應該慎重。你真的瞭解雅思寫作是如何打分的嗎?你的作文真的符合雅思寫作評分標準的要求嗎?雅思寫作壓分?雅思複議前你需要考慮這些……具體請看下文!

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雅思寫作複議前你需要考慮這些

雅思寫作壓分真的存在嗎?

首先我們來看一下雅思寫作判分流程:

1. 雅思考試中除了聽力和閱讀是機器讀卡判卷外,雅思口語的打分和寫作的判卷都是人工完成的;

2. 寫作中大、小作文成績分別由兩個不同的考官評出;

3. 大、小作文每篇文章只有一個考官評分,而不是坊間傳言的一篇文章兩個考官打分。

但這並不代表兩個考官對一篇文章分別評分。而是考官1評完分,如果考生沒有異議,考官1所給分數即爲考生該文章成績,但若是考生提出複議時,考官2會撕掉考官1的評分重新對該文章打分,這也是爲什麼考官1的評分在下面,考官2 的評分在上面的原因。

考官第二次的評分是考生該文章最終成績,如考生仍有異議也不可再申請複議。

通過以上分析大家可以看出,寫作複議只有一次機會。判斷是否進行復議,避免不必要的支出(複議費用1400RMB);如何做到複議即可提分,省去再次漫長的備考過程,這是一個重要的和講究策略的決定。

雅思複議成功率大不大

1. 考生要清楚考試遇到的作文題目對自己是難、是易,以及能大致評估出自己所寫作文的水平(高、中、低那一檔)。

2. 其它三個單項成績和寫作成績的分差(其它三個單項分數要高於寫作)。

關於雅思複議:

1、雅思複議結果什麼時候出:6個星期之內。

2、雅思複議費用 1400+快遞費用

3、雅思複議會降分嗎?雅思複議成功,你將會獲得新的雅思成績單,如果複議結果降分,則分數維持不變。

4、雅思複議成功如何退款:雅思複議成功後,你的複議費用會原路返回你的銀行賬戶

注:這些詞和短語在口語對話或者非正式寫作中是可以接受的,然而在雅思作文中,你應該避免使用一些過於不正式、不精確、模糊、誇張、主觀性強以及空洞、冗長的表達。

雅思寫作評分標準:

考生質疑自己的雅思寫作壓分,也許你應該再瞭解一下雅思寫作評分標準,看看自己是否符合要求。

寫作任務完成情況(TA)/任務迴應情況(TR)

Task 1的要求是考生在大約20分鐘內完成一篇至少150字的文章,包括:summarize, describe or explain 圖表所包含的信息,同時也需要對相關信息進行比較。

爲了出色地完成Task 1,在TA這個標準下,考官建議注意以下幾點:

1. 考生需要找出圖標中所有關鍵信息,遺漏重要的細節可能會失分。

2. 進行解釋說明時,需要提供充分、適量的細節。涉及數據或形容趨勢或過程時,保證其真確性。

3. 一個清晰的概述至關重要(開頭或者結尾要做一個總結),即從圖表或數據中總結出最爲明顯的趨勢或者特徵。

Task 2 的要求是考生在大約40分鐘內完成一篇至少250字的文章:就某一問題闡述自己的觀點,並使用證據來支持此觀點。

爲了出色地完成Task 2,在TR這個標準下,考官建議注意以下幾點:

1. 回答題目中的所有要求;

2. 提出並使用論據支持自己的觀點:不要只提觀點!要添加論據來支持觀點並解釋;

3. 不要一句話一筆帶過一個觀點;

4. 保證整篇文章的觀點清晰一致。

連貫與銜接(CC)

旨在考察考生組織文章以及連接信息和觀點的能力。連貫性指文章的流暢程度、文章的觀點應該邏輯清楚、段落結構恰當,以易於理解和把握。銜接性指連接詞的使用,有助於整合觀點並闡明段落、句子或句子成分之間的關係。

在CC這個標準下,考官建議我們注意以下幾點:

1. 分段很重要,有助於階段性地解釋文章論點;每個段落中最好闡述一個觀點或者一組觀點;

2. 句首中心句,簡明地提出本段主要觀點;

3. 恰當地使用連接詞或短語來連接段落和句子 ;(注意不要使用過度!)

task 2中,可以開頭改述題目,提出自己的觀點;正文部分列舉論點,結尾部分解釋自己的觀點。

雅思寫作6分在CC這方面的官方要求:

1. 連貫地組織信息及觀點,總體來說,能清晰地推進行文發展;

2. 有效地使用銜接手段,但句內及/ 或句間的銜接有時有誤或過於機械;

3. 有時無法保持一貫清晰或恰當地使用指代;

4. 使用段落寫作,但未能保持段落間的邏輯。(task 2相比task 1多的一項要求)

詞彙多樣性(LR)

這個評分標準主要考察考生寫作詞彙的多樣性&準確性。在學習英文詞彙事,在LR這個標準下,

我們建議大家可以從以下方面:

1. 注意學習同義詞,有效避免用詞重複;

2. 學習多種描述變化或趨勢的表達方式;

3. 在文中避免過多使用考題中的單詞;

task 2 中儘可能多的找出題目中的關鍵詞所對應的同義詞並在文中使用;

1. 不要孤立的學習單詞,要學習詞組組合或詞彙搭配;

2. 在不同的語境中,使用正確的詞性;

3. 寫完一定要檢查;(檢查拼寫錯誤,豐富語言)

4. 正確使用一些不常見詞彙。不要試圖使用複雜的詞彙打動考官;

5. 考官不會根據文章觀點的創意正確與否進行評分,看的是你的有效、準確地闡述觀點!

語法多樣性及準確性(GRA)

多樣性:關注時態、比較級、情態動詞、條件句、被動語態、複雜句的使用。

準確性:並不要求考生做到100%無誤,但控制錯誤率很重要!考官將會根據這些錯誤“影響信息交流的程度”酌情扣分,而非“錯誤的數量”!

在GRA這個標準下,我們需要注意的是:

描述某件事情的時候,一定要考慮句子的時態。如果這件事情發生在過去,就用過去時態;如果發生在現在,就用現在時態,如果是對未來的推測,就用多種將來時態;

在分析task1 的表格的時候就要分析數據發生的時態,選用恰當的時態對錶格中的信息進行描述;

複雜句和簡單句,兩者使用量要平衡;

留出時間檢查語法錯誤,你會發現你總是能夠發現一些錯誤,糾正錯誤,提高語法準確

雅思寫作壓分?也許只是你以爲自己寫的還不錯,結果卻入了雅思寫作低分的坑。

雅思寫作低分原因分析:

informal 非正式用語

雅思作文要比網站上的一些非學術材料或者平時我們說話的語言更爲嚴謹和正式,下面這些詞對於寫作來說太隨意。

unsophisticated 用詞不準確

有些詞不應該被使用,因爲它們沒有學術的風格。因爲使用太多的簡單詞彙會讓你的寫作感覺很基礎,最好可以用更精確的詞來代替。用一個詞代替動詞短語是更好的選擇。

vague 表達模糊

使用含糊不清的詞彙會讓你的寫作不精確,可能會讓人們用不同的方式來解讀它。一定要避免下面的表達,儘量使語言更具體。

exaggerated 用詞誇張

學術寫作通常是不加修飾和直接的。一些頻率副詞(如always和never)、最高級(這些詞表示某事物是最高程度的,例如best)和加強詞(這些詞是用來表示強調的,比如very),往往過於戲劇化。

他們可能也不準確——當你說某件事是完美的或者從來沒有發生過的時候,你是在做出一個重大的斷言。這些術語有時會增加價值,但儘量少使用它們。

rally unnecessary 非必要用詞

你應該努力使你的雅思寫作儘可能簡練,避免添加那些沒有意義的單詞和短語,即使你認爲它們給你的寫作帶來了更精煉的感覺。

雅思寫作範文:與父母同住

Task:In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Sample answer:

Nowadays, an increasing number of adults choose to live with their parents after finishing their academic tasks and finding jobs. The overall effect of this phenomenon is negative, although the younger generation can get much help from their parents.

It is widely acknowledged that living with parents contributes to relieve young adults’ strains and stresses. They bear great pressure from their work and study, and are not willing to adapt to an independent life. The parents, especially the retired adults, are always ready to prepare everything for their children, helping them to concentrate on their work. In addition, young people can learn much experience from their parents who are more experienced in dealing with interpersonal relationships and career development. As a new comer in the working arena, the young generation are too na?ve to manage their various challenges. Undoubtedly, it is of great value for them to live with their parents.

On the other hand, continuing to live with parents will unavoidably cause some conflicts. Growing up in two different times, the views and lifestyles between these two generations are less likely to be the same. With the passage of time, the family bond will be alienated. What’s worse, if the adults lead a life with parents for a long time, they are particularly likely to have a sentimental attachment to their parents excessively. It will be increasingly difficult for them to start a new life when their parents cannot provide help any longer. It is detrimental for forming a new family in the future.

When considering the effects of living with parents on young generation, we can conclude that this lifestyle is not universally suitable for every individual. As to most young people, they had better to live independently in order to keep a harmonious relation with parents and a balance between work and life.

(307 words)

雅思寫作範文:名人資助艾滋病

Task:Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sample answer:

With the negative influence of famous people’s bad behavior exposing to our slight more frequently, plenty of citizens begin to doubt their support towards international aid organizations. However, many people still believe that famous people are helpers rather problem makers. From my point of view, international aid organizations can attract more citizens’ attention on problems if celebrities give the right support and set up good images.

It is sensible to argue that international charity groups can take advantage of the publicity of celebrities. With the announcement of high-profile figures, such as famous singers, movie stars and sports professionals, the activities or campaigns of international organisations can be responded immediately, if they are endorsed by celebrities. In the early time of this year, ALS Ice Bucket Challenge spread around the world within a few days by the sharing of many celebrities. Meanwhile, the organisations also received millions of donation by fans as well.

Nevertheless, it is an undeniable fact that a small part of celebrities don’t gain much popularity or bring any convenience to international aid organizations. Although some celebrities give their support to these organizations outwardly, they don’t bring any tangible help. For example, some celebrities lead a luxurious life and never take practical actions to social problems, or even only take advantage of international aid organizations to advocate for themselves. As a result, the public will loose confidence to these organizations, not to mention solving problems.

To sum up, I believe international aid organizations will receive much more help from celebrities and figure out more problems if celebrities can make the right choices and their celebrity effect is used appropriately.

(271 words)

雅思寫作範文:先旅遊or先工作?

Task:School leavers go travelling or work before they go directly to university. Are there more advantages or disadvantages on their study?

Sample answer:

Before the beginning of university, students who wish to continue with their education face two probable choice--either suspend their study for a year to obtain work and travel experience, or go directly into university. I will analyze the pros and cons of these two choices below.

A year’s time to work or travel before university has been popular among young people in recent years. In fact, students can obtain several good points by doing this. To begin with, students can enhance their life skills and maintain a balance between their studies and work from the one yeat experience. They will become more independent during this meaningful process. Also, they can identify career preference and areas of interests during travelling, which will help them to decide their major in university.

However, one year’s work or travel also has its obvious disadvantages. Coming fresh out og high school, students do not have a clear understanding of the harsh realities of the world. They are not in a strong position to undertake early employment. Besides, young people are not able to make a correct career decision. Choosing a career requires sufficient knowledge of one’s own strengths, aptitudes and the trends in job market. Most young adults lack such knowledge. Moreover, travelling and working will divert young people’s attention from their previous objectives. If students give up the opportunity of being educated and pursue other ventures, they will lose their willpower to learn something carefully and patiently. The side effect of disengagement from schooling might not be significant in the first several years, but it will surly disadvantages them a lot in a long run.

To conclude, work or travel before university has its advantages and disadvantages. In fact, the disadvantages outweigh advantages.

(294 words)

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