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託福寫作三選一模板解析

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針對託福寫作三選一的題型,我們應該怎麼來使用模板答題呢?下面小編就爲大家整理了詳細的解題思路,幫助大家更好地備考託福寫作考試。

託福寫作三選一模板解析

託福寫作三選一模板解析

總的來說三選一類型題目和普通的二選一進行比較的題目在本質上是相同的,我們在處理A or B這種題目時假設選定A方,則接下來就需要解釋A在哪些方面優於B,而不是單純只找A本身的優勢忽略比較性,這樣題目給出的2方纔能充分在文章中出現。

以此類推,當題目給出ABC三個選項時,選擇其中一個選項比如A作爲自己的支持方,自然BC這二項則成爲了對立面,那麼論點的尋找就要考慮A在哪些方面優於B and C。所以論點公式可以理解成:

1. A > B(重點寫A優於B的方面)

2. A > C (重點寫A優於C的方面)

1. A1 > B+C (寫A同時優於BC的一個方面)

2.A2 > B+C (寫A同時優於BC的另一方面)

首先我們來看一下43套中獨立寫作題目:

Question:

Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect. In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?

-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away

-Wait until the class or meeting is over and the people are gone, and then talk to the teacher or meeting leader

-Say nothing

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

根據課堂經驗,大部分同學會傾向於第二個選項B“事後再向老師或領導更正”,這裏我們就用這個選項B作爲觀點來解釋:

? 論點1就可以考慮B相對於A有何優勢,所以立即想到B是強調“事後”,而A則強調“當場”,則想到 Audience, whether students or meeting attendees, can easily be distracted by embarrassment brought by sudden interruption of teachers or leaders being corrected right away and then are likely to discuss mistakes they have made with each other. Consequently, teachers or leaders can hardly continue their speech without quiet environment and participants’ attention.

? 論點2就可以考慮B相對於C有何優勢,則想到Audience can realize what the problem is and form a deeper impression if mistakes of speakers are disclosed the minute they are made. Otherwise, they may be misled, using wrong knowledge or information they receive in the future study or work.

(ps:這裏題目中的“教學或會議”都能在文中出現,也爲同學們不管是論證說理還是舉例都提供了多樣性的內容表達,二段可以少一些重複)

另外我們再來看一道近半年來考試中常出現的題目:

You community has a piece of land and is considering introducing a business to this land. Which business would you prefer?

-Shopping mall

- A performing art center

-A hotel

這道題目選擇A “shopping mall”作爲建造對象更爲簡單好寫

? 論點1其實可以考慮A同時優於B+C 的情況:Shopping mall can bring people living in the community considerable convenience, thus improving their quality of life. Compared with a shopping mall which can provide abundant entertainment like cinemas and cafe, a performing art center is rather limited in entertaining the public, for people who are interested in it are comparatively less. Hotel, which can barely become a choice for local people living around, is even more impractical than Shopping Mall.

? 論點2也能找到A同時優於B+C 的另一方面:Moreover, building a shopping mall in the community brings enormous economic benefits to local people by attracting investment and providing job opportunities. However, neither an art center nor a hotel, if constructed, can stimulate consumption immediately or guarantee enough material benefits directly.

最後以一道難題結尾

In times of economic crisis, in which area should governments reduce its spending on?

-Education

-Healthcare

-Support for unemployment

這道題目相對來說“特殊”一點,因爲題中問的是“哪方面費用應該被縮減”,相當於是讓同學們挑出你覺得“最不重要”的一項,而前面常規文法就是正面讓大家挑“最好的”一項,所以解題的思路要反着想了,即需要同學們考慮“爲什麼這個選項是最不重要應該被削減費用的?”或者說“另外二項爲什麼重要不應該削減費用?”

針對此題宏觀思路展開的難點舉例分析

例如,總觀點定爲選項A,即“經濟危機時期,政府應該減少在教育方面的投資”

論點1可以從“經濟危機時,B醫療保健比A教育更需要資金”來考慮展開:醫療保健是人們最基本的需求,在這方面失去保障短期內很容易導致人們基本生存條件不足,引起社會不安以及對於政府的不信任;而此時減少教育開支則不會立即影響國家教育質量,因爲現有的大多數教育資源如教師,設備,圖書館,資料庫等仍可繼續被充分利用,等經濟好轉後再很快能彌補。

論點2可以從“經濟危機時,C下崗補助比A教育更需要資金”來考慮展開:經濟危機時很容易出現很多人失業或收入大幅下降以及資金大量貶值的情況,此時若也無下崗補助,當無法滿足基本物質需求時人們可能會訴諸一些不良手段,如遊行示威,甚至犯罪,造成社會不穩定;而相反暫時性的先降低教育開銷,短期也不會完全顛覆人們的正常生活。

  託福備考之寫作中的加分詞句

在此之前,大家可以和我一起看一個比較有意思的寫作調侃,內容如下:

越來越多的人開始騎自行車。

學沫版: More and more people begin to ridebicycle.

學渣版: A growing number of people begin tocycle.

僞學霸: Cycling attracts more and more people.

學霸版: Cycling is adding its appeal for manycitizens.

學神版: Cycling gains its popularity.

給自己定位完畢,我們來學習今天的幾個詞語。

1. Spawn v. 產卵,滋生

2. Attribute v.歸因於

3. Draw on 借鑑

4. End up doing something 最終會...

5. Reflect on 認真思考

想必以上幾個詞很多同學都認識,可是,下面的幾句寫作常用句中,你知道如何使用以上的詞彙嗎?

1. 這樣的做法會產生很多社會問題。

2. 成功很多情況下是由於團隊的共同努力。

3. 借鑑歷史的教訓十分重要。

4. 如果不保護環境,人類最終會滅絕。

5. 認真思考過後我發現這個觀點是不成立的。

我們來看看建議的5個句子:

1. This conduct would spawn a lot ofsocietal problems/

2. Success, in most cases, can beattributed to the team’s concerted efforts.

3. It counts to draw on history.

4. Human beings would end up being extinctif they did not protect environment

5. Reflecting on this statement carefully,I found it unconvincing.

  託福寫作之滿分作文的三大核心

滿分作文的三大核心是結構、內容和語言

首先我們先從結構、內容和語言三個方面揭祕託福作文獨立任務得滿分的真相。

以下題爲例: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinions.

一、結構

按題材劃分,獨立任務屬於議論文,而論點、理由、論據、結論和論證是議論文的五個要素。具體來說,“論點”是文章的核心,“理由”是論點成立的依據,兩者構成因果關係;“論據”是對理由的具體解釋,多爲事例;“結論”是對觀點的重申,兩者一脈相承、頭尾呼應;而整個寫作過程就是一個“論證”的過程。

要想作文得高分,這五要素就必須面面俱到,如此才能寫出結構嚴謹、條理清晰的高分作文

先上一篇範文(下拉可見全文):

As society progresses remarkably, tremendous changes have taken place in people’s life. Nevertheless, some senior citizens cherish the memory of good old days with healthy environment and harmonious interpersonal relationships. As far as I’m concerned, despite serious environmental pollution and prevalence of materialism, 【背景介紹,作者給出了兩個時代的對比】 I still believe today’s life to be easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. 【提出論點】 I am going to elaborate my viewpoint from three aspects as follows. 【過渡句,承上啓下】

To begin with, modern communication technology has changed our lives a lot and provides us with much convenience. 【理由 1】To be more specific, with the wide application of smartphones and the Internet, it is possible for people to contact each other even if they live separately. 【論證爲什麼理由 1 可以推出觀點】 For example, Lily, one of my best friends, is lucky to be admitted into a famous university in America, which means we cannot always hang out together. But thanks to the modern communication technology, we still keep frequent touch with each other on Skype anytime, anywhere. Therefore we feel never apart.

【例子 1】

Besides, a variety of means of transportation make it quick and cozy for people to travel. 【理由 2】 Subways, taxis, private cars, high-speed railways shorten the distance between places. 【論證爲什麼理由 2 可以推出觀點】A good example in point is that my grandparents used to live in suburbs, and anytime they want to do some shopping in urban center, it usually took them 2 hours, owing to bumpy roads and low-efficient old-fashioned vehicles. On the contrary, with great improvement of road condition and advanced traffic modes, they only have to spend 20 minutes a most traveling from home to the city. If it is very hot in summer, all modern vehicles are air-conditioned, which can make the trip very comfortable.

【例子 2】

Last but not least, today’s ample food supply and various food choices are something beyond imagination in the past. 【理由 3】 Decades ago, in China, all foods used to be arranged by the government. In other words, it was impossible for people to purchase what they liked to eat. 【論證爲什麼理由 3 可以推出觀點】 For example, an average family was only allocated 1 pound of pork and 2 pounds of rice. In contrast, nowadays, we never have to worry about the lack of food because supermarkets and snack bars abound.

【例子 3】

To sum up, because of the progress of economy and technology, I am convinced that life at present is more comfortable and easier, which can be well demonstrated through examples of convenient communication, quick and cozy traffic modes and sufficient food supply and choices. 【總結理由,重申觀點】 If our government takes efficient measures to solve the environmental problem, our world will become a better place to live.

【提出建議,展望未來】

議論文除了五要素,在給出論點之前多會有簡單的背景介紹,不需要長,三兩句話即可,爲論點的提出造勢。

二、內容

這篇範文通過通訊、交通和飲食三個方面,共同論證現在的孩子相較其祖父輩生活的更輕鬆、舒適,每個理由下面都有具體的事例作爲細節支撐,讓論證更有說服力。

以飲食爲例,作者舉例說,以前食品由政府分配,數量有限制,人們不能隨心所欲買到需要的食品;而現在則大不一樣,在超市裏人們可以買到任何所需物品。這種新舊對比,更鮮明的表現出現代社會物資豐富、人們的選擇權增加,由此可推斷人們的生活變得更便捷、舒適,從而證明論點。

三、語言

一篇高分作文在語言上,首先要保證語法正確,用詞恰當,這樣才能準確達意。在此基礎上可以追求更多樣、高級的表達。例如,文章開頭要表現“社會發展迅速,人們的生活發生了天翻地覆的變化”這一含義,最常見的表達爲:

Sample 1: Our society develops quickly, and people’s life has changed greatly.

Sample 2: With the rapid development of society, enormous change has happened in people’s life.

Sample 3: As society progresses remarkably, tremendous changes have taken place in people’s life.

通過三個句子對比可知,其中“迅速”的三種表達方式,quickly 最爲平淡,rapid 居中,remarkable 最佳。同樣的,要表達“翻天覆地”的含義,tremendous 就要比 great 或者 enormous 好的多,其他替換的詞還有 considerable,drastic,significant 等等。

語言的優化需要不斷的積累和練習,多記多練,不斷擴充自己的語料庫,唯有如此,文章纔會寫的越來越漂亮,但是咱們很多考生平時不練筆,不積累語料,想單純依賴“複雜單詞,黃金句型”就拿高分——基本沒戲。

  託福寫作範文:小組學習

託福獨立寫作題目:小組學習

Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

託福獨立寫作範文:

People have different styles of studying. Some prefer the solitude of studying alone, while others thrive on the social interaction that comes from studying in a group. Certain subjects, as well, lend themselves more easily to one style versus the other. In many ways, the choice between individual and group study comes down to whether one enjoys the presence of others while studying, or finds that the more people involved in the conversation the greater the distraction. All in all, I prefer group study for two primary reasons.

First, group study allows for a social element that makes studying fun rather than arduous. If I sit alone, my mind often becomes distracted, and I easily lose focus. When I am working with a group, however, the social dynamics keeps constantly engaged in the studying process. For example, while I was studying at Oxford, I was working with a cohort of six other international students on a group project. Had I had to work on this project individually, it would have been boring, and I would not have put much effort into it. However, given the fact that each person in our cohort was from a different culture and country, working together was an exploration of different worldviews and philosophies of study, which made it an enjoyable exercise. I walked away from the project knowing more about my classmates’ lives, families and methods of working, as well as my own.

A second reason I prefer studying in a group is that I am able to clarify ideas by bouncing them off of other members of the group. For instance, at law school we are regular asked to identify the potential actions for a case, as well as defenses that the accused might raise. Working alone, I am able to identify perhaps eighty percent or so of the claims and defenses in the assignment. When I work with a few of my classmates, however, we usually are able to clearly identify all of the salient claims and defenses, and joke around while doing it. Different minds think and interpret differently, which leads to a broader range of answers.

In summary, I prefer studying in a group setting because studying in a group incorporates a social element to studying that makes it more enjoyable, and working in a group allows me to identify more solutions than I would be able to alone. In life, one generally has to be able to work with others in an effective manner, and studying in a group is an easy way to hone this skill.

來源:哈佛21篇

託福獨立寫作題目解析

1. People have different styles of studying.

人們有不同的學習風格

2. Some prefer the solitude(獨處,清淨) of studying alone, while(表對比) others thrive on(喜歡=prefer) the social interaction(社交) that comes from studying in a group.

一些人喜歡獨自學的清淨,而另一些人喜歡源自小組學習的社交。

3. Certain subjects, as well, lend themselves more easily to(更適合...) one style versus(vs對) the other.

某些學科相對於其他學科來說也更適合一種風格。

4. In many ways, the choice between individual and group study comes down to(歸結爲) whether one enjoys the presence of others while studying, or finds that the more people involved in the conversation the greater the distraction.

從很多方面來說,選擇獨自學習和小組學習歸結爲是否享受在學習時他人的存在,或發現更多的人蔘與談話,就越分心。

5. All in all, I prefer group study for two primary reasons(表達觀點句式).

總之,我更傾向於小組學習因爲兩個主要原因。

6. First, group study allows for a social element that makes studying fun rather than arduous(艱難的).

首先,小組學習允許社交,這使學習變得有趣而不困難。

7. If I sit alone, my mind often becomes distracted, and I easily lose focus.

如果我獨自坐着,我會容易分心,而且我容易注意力不集中。

8. When I am working with a group, however, the social dynamics keeps constantly engaged in the studying process.

然而,當我和一羣人一起工作,社交動力讓我持續參與學習過程。

9. For example, while I was studying at Oxford, I was working with a cohort of (一羣,一組)six other international students on a group project(小組項目).

比如說,當我在牛津學習時,我和六個其他國際學生一起完成一個小組項目。

10. Had I had(虛擬語氣) to work on this project individually, it would have been boring, and I would not have put much effort into(對...付出努力) it.

假如我需要獨自完成這個項目,會很枯燥,而且我不會在這上面付出太多努力。

11. However, given the fact that(考慮到...) each person in our cohort(=group was from a different culture and country, working together was an exploration of different worldviews(世界觀) and philosophies(philosophy哲學) of study, which made it an enjoyable exercise.

但是,考慮到我們組的每一個人都來自於不同的文化和國家,一起工作是對不同世界觀和學習理念的探索,這會成爲一次愉快的練習。

12. I walked away from the project knowing more about my classmates’ lives, families and methods of working, as well as my own.

離開這個項目時我更加了解我同學以及自己的生活,家庭和工作方式。

13. A second reason I prefer studying in a group is that I am able to clarify(澄清,闡明) ideas by bouncing them off(bounce off大發議論)of other members of the group.

我喜歡小組學習的第二個原因是我能通過和小組其他成員觀點碰撞澄清自己的想法。

14. For instance, at law school we are regular asked to identify the potential actions for a case, as well as defenses that the accused might raise.

比如說,在法學院我們會定期被要求識別出一個案例的潛在行動以及被告方有可能提出的辯護。

15. Working alone, I am able to identify perhaps eighty percent or so of the claims and defenses in the assignment.

獨自學習,我能夠我能夠識別作業中百分之八十的訴求和辯護。

16. When I work with a few of my classmates, however, we usually are able to clearly identify all of the salient(突出的) claims and defenses, and joke around while doing it.

然而當我和幾位同學一起學習時,我通常能清楚識別所有突出的訴求和辯護,而且能在完成任務的同時開玩笑。

17. Different minds think and interpret differently, which leads to a broader range of(更廣泛的) answers.

不同人想法和解釋不同,這帶來了更多的答案。

18. In summary, I prefer studying in a group setting(背景,環境) because studying in a group incorporates(包含) a social element to studying that makes it more enjoyable, and working in a group allows me to identify more solutions than I would be able to alone.

總之,我更喜歡小組學習,因爲小組學習給學習融入了社交元素,讓學習更有趣,而且小組工作讓我比獨自學習發現更多的解決方案。

19. In life, one generally has to be able to work with others in an effective manner, and studying in a group is an easy way to hone this skill(磨練技能).

生活中,一個人通常不得不以一種有效的方式同他人合作,而且小組學習是一種提升技能的簡單方式。

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