雅思寫作素材和模板模仿要慎重
很多時候，中國的英語教育一直注重應試。
中國學生只在乎是否獲得一個雅思考試成績，而不在乎是否學的東西在生活中可以應用。
模板弄熟，然後背下素材，填進去，素材出現複雜句和大詞，形式上符合了大部分考試的要求，從而讓開口難和動筆難的學生屢試不爽的通過大小考試。
雅思的意義，在於考官是英文母語者，他們的標準就一條：“我只看你寫的東西是否合理和恰當”。(whether you can present ideas logically and naturally)
模板之害，就是在於學生即便有想法，也說不完，因爲說完了，模板就套不上了。
素材之害，就是在於學生即便覺得不對，也要寫上去，因爲既然背了，不寫就白背了。
該寫的不寫，不該寫的寫了。
在以前的考試能夠活的下去。雅思卻不行。
這就是爲什麼很多老師和學生總是覺得雅思不公平，很難。。
其實，是以前的考試太簡單了。
我們看看下面這個題目兩個學生的段落，還有我的段落對比。
Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
第一個學生 (用了模板)
Many people think that narrowing the gap between the rich and the poor helps create a happier society (爲了套模板，抄了題目，考官要看到的是真正的觀點).one main reason is that (還是模板，但是這句話說的是社會不公平的壞處，前面一句話說的是貧富減少的好處，兩句話中間思維跳躍)imbalance social distribution causes some argument and these argument can pose a threat to the society. For example (再套模板，這個例其實根本就不是例子，例子是解釋前面名名詞的東西), the crime rate may decrease because the poor can afford their living cost and they feel happy because they be treated equality in the society instead of classifying by their property.
第二個學生 (用了素材)
Less differences between people from different backgrounds make it easier for them to share equal access to social resources such as educational oppurtunities, health care etc. by doing so, people can make the same success. For instance, a student from disadvanteged family can also become a high caliber one. When people all can fulfill their potential and succeed in their own businesses, there would not be discriminations (用了素材的觀點，沒有歧視，而這裏的上下文根本不可能提到歧視，邏輯一下就亂了). So, people feel happier.
下面是我的段落
Closing the gap between rich and poor requires governments to pay attention to the well-being of poor people and take action to ensure that these people lead a happy life. For example, these people can go to college and have the same opportunities to get better-paying jobs as those from rich families. They can get rid of poverty and enjoy a reasonable standard of living. This is a vital part of a happy society. In contrast, crimes can be rampant in a society where people are at a disadvantage due to their social status.
很多雅思考生總是對自己中國式的備考方法存有妄念，覺得多衝幾次總能過。結果就是萬年5分，5.5分。
雅思就這麼一條路，你可以選擇走很多彎路，回頭再走。
也可以現在就選擇走。
