上大學前要先工作嗎？ Go to Work Before Entering University?

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In china, it is the traditional for high school students attend university after they graduate from high school for about three months. Many students will use these three months to stay home for relax. However, now there are some people point out that they should use that time to gain work experience, instead of wasting time. I agree with them. In my opinion, going to work before entering university has many advantages.
在中國，高中生畢業約三個月後就開始上大學是一直以來的傳統。很多學生會利用這三個月呆在家裏放鬆。然而，現在有人指出他們應該利用這段時間來獲取工作經驗，而不是浪費時間。我同意他們的觀點。在我看來，上大學前要先工作是有很多優點的。
First of all, going to work before university is helpful for high school students to figure out the most desire major they want. As most high school students are busy with study in school, they don’t have too much time to find what they want in the future. The most important two points in choosing university and major are interest and employment. If they work before entering college, they can have a clearer mind for themselves. They have more chances to make a right choice. In addition, working before going to university can make them treasure their school life more. Life is not easy. When they work, they can realize this. Having taste the bitter, they will treasure their happy life more. 
首先，上大學前先工作有助於高中學生弄清楚他們最想要的是什麼專業。由於大多數高中生在學校的時候都是忙於學習，他們都沒有時間去了解自己將來想要的是什麼。在選擇學習和專業時最重要的兩點是興趣和就業。如果在上大學前先工作，他們可以更清晰的瞭解自己。就有更多的機會做出正確的選擇。此外，上大學前工作可以更加珍惜學校生活。生活並不容易。他們工作的時候，他們就會意識到這一點。經歷過苦難後，他們纔會更珍惜自己的幸福生活。
To summary, going to work before entering university is a chance for high school graduate students to see themselves or the world better. It is good for them. 
總之，上大學前先工作對高中畢業生來說是更好的認清自己和這個世界的機會。這對他們是好的。