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英語高考作文之如何遣詞造句

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  英語高考作文之如何遣詞造句(一)

1.用詞準確,得體

寫作中每個詞彙的選取都要符合語言環境的要求。其中,動詞最爲重要。

(1)我把鑰匙忘在車裏了。

A:I forgot my keys in the car.(F)

B:I left my keys in the car.(T)

(2)我的夢想實現了。

A:My dream has become true.(F)

B:My dream has come true.(T)

2.選詞多樣

寫作中要恰當得體地使用高中學習的較爲高級一些的詞彙。

(1)我幾乎睜不開眼睛。

A:I can not open my eyes.(一般)

B:I can hardly keep my eyes open.(優秀)

(2)他是個新手。

A:He is a new one.(一般)

B:He is a green hand.(優秀)

3.短語優先

多使用詞組、習語來代替一些單詞,以增加文采。

(1)我再也不能忍受他跟我說話的方式了。

A:I can no longer bear the way he speaks to me.(一般)

B:I can no longer put up with the way he speaks to me.(優秀)

(2)他對我在課堂上所說的置若罔聞。

A:He didn't listen to what I said in the class.(一般)

B:He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class.(優秀)

4.避免重複

儘量避免過多地使用某一個單詞,必要時選擇使用其他恰當的同義詞或詞組來代替。

(1)我喜歡讀書而我的兄弟則喜歡看足球賽。

A:I like reading while my brother likes watching foot­ball matches.(一般)

B:I like reading while my brother enjoys watching foot­ball matches.(優秀)

(2)傑克是我們學校的學生。他學習特別努力。

A:Jack studies in our studies very hard.(一般)

B:Jack studies in our works hard at his lessons.(優秀)

  英語高考作文之如何遣詞造句(二)

1.改變句子開頭的方式。

可以適當地把一些成分(如狀語)提前,放在句子的開頭,這樣使整個句子讀起來跌宕起伏,增加書面表達的表現力。

(1)我今天早晨收到了你十月十八日的來信。

A:I received your letter which was written on October 18th this morning.(一般)

B:Your letter of October 18th reached me this morning.(優秀)

(2)那個房子既黑暗又空蕩,跟我記得的形式不同。

A:The house was dark and it looked very different from the way I remembered it.(一般)

B:Dark and empty,the house looked very different from the way I remembered it.(優秀)

2.使用一些表達感情的句式,如強調句、感嘆句、倒裝句等,增強語句的表現力。

(1)那是一部有趣的電影。

A:It is an interesting film.(一般)

B:What an interesting film it is!(優秀)

C:How interesting a film it is!(優秀)

(2)只是當他回來時我們才查明瞭真相。

A:We found out the truth when he returned.(一般)

B:We didn't find out the truth until he returned.(優秀)

C:Only when he returned did we find out the truth.(優秀)

3.句式多樣,複雜得體。

在寫作中應避免使用相同長度的相同句式,而應注意句式的變化,如長短句結合,簡單句、並列句與複合句共用;一些較複雜的結構如獨立主格結構、分詞結構等也可使用。

(1)他的父親是否能痊癒還是個問題。他爲此非常焦慮不安。

A:He doesn't know whether his father will recover,so he is very upset.(一般)

B:Whether his father will recover is still a he is very upset.(簡單句與複合句共用)(優秀)

(2)你每天幫我學英語。你太好了!

A:You help me study English every are very kind.(一般)

B:It's very kind of you to help me learn English every day.(優秀)

C:How kind of you to help me learn English every day!(優秀)

  練習

1. 選擇適當的單詞填空

't read ________ the sunlight.(in/under)

has a ________ body temperature.(high/hot)

lives ________ and often feels ________.(alone/lonely)

4.I think the patient will get ________ soon.(good/well)

________Christmas with a tree and many presents.(congratulate/celebrate)

  2. 一句多譯

1.媽媽匆匆忙忙上班去了,連早飯都沒吃。

Mother went to work hurrily;she didn't have breakfast.

=Mother went to work ____________ didn't have breakfast.

=Mother went to work in a hurry ____________ breakfast.

2.我寧願呆在家裏也不願去看電影。

I prefer ____________ at home rather than ____________ the film.

=I prefer ____________ at home to ____________ the film.

=I would rather ________ at home than go to see the film.

3.我們到達農場時,受到了農民的熱烈歡迎。

When we got to the farm,we were given a warm welcome by the farmers.

=When__________ the farm,we__________a warm welcome from the farmers.

=On________________,wewere ________________ by the farmers.

  3. 句型轉換

walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用過去分詞)

=___________________________________________________________.

2.I won't believe what he says.(使用狀語從句)

=___________________________________________________________.

had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒裝句改寫)

=___________________________________________________________.

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